Ok this poem is ok not the best, but that's because you need to spell words correctly and not use slang
it could have been better.
also the poem is a little cliche
may be you can try putting a little detail in it..

the poem is cute...but you're emotions would be a bigger impact if you would just take the time to search deep in you and just write what you feel.
Also do alot of reading in other peoples poems or poetry books.. i know for a fact they will help you a lot...
hopefully i helped...=)

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*