His Tears

by Meme   Apr 23, 2008


I know that I sometimes act so cold
But this never means that I am bold
And there are some feelings that I hold
But they just need a chance to be unfold
Before I loose what's keeping me controlled

So I need someone to guide my way
And tell me that my life is going to be ok
To be able to survive each and every day
So there comes a time that I feel so gray
And they always have this thing to say

Its the only word that I always hear
That I am strong and have no fear
But they never notice when I am near
That I am not as strong as it appears
Because I break when I see his tears

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© Copyright 2008 by: gIrL
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  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Wow...That was more than amazing..The flow was nice and the rhyme as well..
    U r a great writer...Keep up the good work:)..
    Take Care..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent write....

    I found it very sweet... beautifully written..

    "Its the only word that I always hear
    That I am strong and have no fear
    But they never notice when I am near
    That I am not as strong as it appears
    Because I break when I see his tears "

    ^^this stanza reflects a lot of innocence...as well as the sadness within you..

    liked it..

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    This poem showz ur attachment to sumone special... N I hope wen one among both is down itz d other who holds ur moral & spirit high.. right..?

    Ya sumtimes d world feels we r more than strong enough n comment we do not feel or break... they say at times we r stones…;)

    But wen will d world understand.. A stone is not a stone after all n it has feelings, dreams, n a heart that beats..it pretends not to still deep within It only loves, prays n cares... It really never hates at all….

    Lovely poem gIrL..

    Keep it up..

    Best wishz.. Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Happy without a reason

    I love it...

    keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this is really good and my friend though so too.