Oh Travis I'm nearly crying. That poems is so sweet and so heart felt. I feel it even more because of the conversation we had last night. I love it so much. Hugs* :) It gets a five for sure.

Awe.. Travis.. amazing!!.. great poem.. you'll be a good daddy.. 5/5...

Great job bro.5/5
** harlea

Oh my travis this poem is truely amazing i loved it and it is going in my favorites i love how you want a kid and it will happen jus wait and see and you will be the perfect dad im sure of it.
5/5
Wonderful Fantastic Job Hun!!!!
Good job big brother

Awww this is soooo sweet
i love it
it reminds me of my boyfriend
it sounds lik sumthing he wud say lol
hes already saying he wants a kid lol
im sitting there okay? lol its funny
but yea great poem i loved it
its very sensitive and adorable
:]
5/5

This was something else.. Im a guy who rly is a fan of rhyming poems but there is something about this one.. that makes it flow so nicely and it has some sort of a rythm when you read it...
As for the poem meaning its a very deep poem since it shows your dream... And a dream will become more than just a dream if one is persistant enough...

Take care and may that dream no longer be just a dream...

This is an abosolutely beautiful poem and the note at the end almost brought me to tears. if anyone ever tells you that a gay man cannot be a father and have a son, then they don't matter and there opinion sure does not matter. you deserve to have a child, just like each and every person does. i hope your dream does come true one day. :D

Wow!
your sweet.
and sensitive.
:)

nice job!

Wow!
your sweet.
and sensitive.
:)

nice job!

AWE!!!! THAT IS SO DARN CUUTE!!! LOVE IT!

Hi!!! you know what i registered here its just because i really want to vote and give comment to your poem,,, i know i will read different and good poem here,, but this is my first list in my "favorite poems" its so sweet and it really touch my heart,,, i wish and i pray that someday your dream will come true.. just always remember good peson have a right to be a good parent no matter who he or she is... God bless..

........ Wow... It goes from something funny then to something serious.... 5/5.... this is really oone of your special poems.

Anyone who thinks gay guys can't be good parents don't know what they're talking about. I bet you'll be a great dad. I really liked this poem.

Skye