This was so sad deep and very well written. I loved it.

I really loved this poem when you first showed it to me. It had a lot of emotion and passion in it, this is one of my favorites from all the poems you've shown me.

This is I must say, a very poigient piece of work. I love the way yu emotions really come through. It's simple and honnest, but it's also very well articulate and it runs well on the toung when you read it out loud. yoou shouldbe proud of this. very well done.

HEY DUDE , that is an exelent poem , a lot of deep feeling, well expressed! I didn't see the self pity in the 3rd stanza, I only saw a comparative flair, accentuated thru-out the entire work! keep tickling that keyboard