Comments : My Last Poem

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh wow....I'm sorry for whatever happened, really. it takes a lot to make a person want to stop writng, i know. and it hurts..or it did for me. this poem was definitely amazing..Jesse's got some competion. :)

    Well I hope this was good
    now my pencil will remain solemn,
    I hope this was my best
    for this is my last poem.

    ^^ and it is truly a beautiful way to end it, hun...great job.

    I hope that whatever is making you stop...I hope you're ok. really..

    5.5 ((wish i could give you like a million more))

  • 16 years ago

    by josejalapeno

    Baby ill always love u and dont worry about it. ill always be ther 4 u. im still here 4 u. mi heart is still red

  • 16 years ago

    by josejalapeno

    U can always whenever have it bac. baby ill always miss u

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I have felt this exact same way. I can feel the pain in it!
    So Amazing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Keep your pencil warm girl , more sad you will feel , those feeling will want to come out someday ,
    let your pencil ready , to tell us how you feel

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, the poem was perfectly penned and the flow was amazing. you really should not stop writting. we need your talent here.

    "Please believe me when I say
    I never meant to hurt you,
    you deserve so much better
    everyone knows you do. "

    sigh, and then they say "guys are jerks" but i say "what about you?" i may be wrong for this situation but anyway great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by annaxapple

    Ahhh!!
    please don't let this be your last poem :(
    you're too good to stop.
    i love it.
    and i know how you feel;;
    you want something that doesn't want you. but, the person that needs you is the person that you need and is the only person that's worth it.
    please keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Amazing. keep goin. P.S, our album's comin out soon. Read my new poem and you'll see a song ((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Amazing. loved it..
    -- aprils conspiracy

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssa

    You have had some rough times i get it...so have i but if you have a gift for poetry and if u didnt love it you wouldnt be so good so keep using that pencil and writing poems cuz its a good way to express yourself...and trust me...i know