Beutifully written, i am in awe, i love reading poems out loud and see the words play out in my head.
5/5

Excellent, best one yet, omg jess, this one did it, i cried like a baby when i read it, your an awesome writer, keep up the good work, there's so much i could say about his amazing poem, but i'll i write is that i loved it jess. It was perfect. xo :)

I totally understand this, I have the same relationship with my father, as protective as he is. I hope you showed this to him he would be proud

I liked the flow and subtle rhyme you used in this poem. The final stanza was a good closing verse. Well done.
Keep writing, Greta.