"why is that Hell seems to be too cold..
but Heaven is far too hot?"

I like these lines they are very good and challange the 'typical' sterotype...

I love the third paragraph its soo well written, I fully agree and love how you worded it

I like the whole poem over all, BUT the first and second paragraph I think, could use a little work, for it's a little bit hard to understand and would do good with rewording

I love this...ur soo good hun

Aww Gabs, how can we ever forget you?

This is actually pretty good hun. I say pretty good because I do not like dark poetry.. it scares me LOL...

Still, you have inked it so well!

Way too beautiful, good job.

Gaggy....you always touch my heart....and you know it!!! I love this line.."reminding me, remind me..time's wasting
slipping away is this last chance"..is this so true or wt........you sure your not like 70.....lool...another great writing....and you know how I feel about it.....xoxo

This is a sad write.

But the clock is so merciless
screaming through the silence
reminding me, remind me..time's wasting
slipping away is this last chance

I likes this stanza the best. The time waits for no one. So many times people wait till it it to late to change.

Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Once again a really great poem