Moonlit Night(Tanka)

by Lonely Rider   Apr 24, 2008


Nocturnal Beetle
Glowing over the bushes,
Chirped a cricket
melody of ecstasy,
Beautiful moonlit nightfall.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love tanka poems and this is certainly an excellent one. Imagery within every line is so amazing, the fact that you managed to portrayed such beauty within short piece is outstanding. I deeply enjoyed in this poem.
    This piece is so vivid and captivating. Remarkable poem.
    You truly have a way with words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This is what i hear at night in mid-summer when i step outside great job! ;) 5/5 This is a favorite of mine from you!