This is what i hear at night in mid-summer when i step outside great job! ;) 5/5 This is a favorite of mine from you!

I love tanka poems and this is certainly an excellent one. Imagery within every line is so amazing, the fact that you managed to portrayed such beauty within short piece is outstanding. I deeply enjoyed in this poem.
This piece is so vivid and captivating. Remarkable poem.
You truly have a way with words.