You pick...sunrise or sunset?

by StandStill   Apr 24, 2008


Oh, these timid tremors
racing through your veins
heartbeat means your living
but living means new pain

Can you handle this challenge,
this uphill battle climb?
Please, I'm begging you
just be patient, take the time

You can do ANYTHING you want
no need to be so empty inside
why do you you look at a sunrise
but in the setting sun you hide?

Do you not know there is morning
after the darkest part of night
I know, I'm supposed to be the strong one
but I need you here to make it right

Just don't forget that pain,
the never ceasing trickle of time,
it's so precariously instilled
in a poet's hopeful mind

**Sorry the last poem was so harsh...Make your choice...you know who you are**

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wow babe.
    this is amazing!
    You did a wonderful job...
    i admire you, because you are going to go somewhere someday with your writing.
    You did a fantastic job on this.
    and i could see your caring, and anger, and frustrations spilling out of this piece.
    Wow..
    wonderful write...
    keep up the freaking amazing work

    ily sooo much!!!!
    Kristina

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