Souvenir(Tetractys)

by Lonely Rider   Apr 24, 2008


Tears
Aching
Broken heart
Crushed hope smashed dreams,
The sad souvenir of falling in love.

**A tetractys is a complete thought written in 20 syllables.
1st line 1 syllable
2nd line 2
3rd line 3
4th line 4
5th line 10

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Wow. Such meaning in few words. This was awesome. It was a perfect dipiction of falling in and out of love. I like this one. This was probably the best one I read all day!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem is kool and everything but I dont get how the title relate's to the poem :( 3/5

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