Comments : His night

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    This poem is spooky! :o But very good with description. I will rate this poem a 4/4 just because it was good but kind of short hun. Me still likey it though.

    love
    xxx
    Travis

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow... its creepy... :)
    well described..
    excellent..

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "Walking alone hearing wolves howl at the moon light"

    I like your start, it creates a clear image in my head. Good use of imagery.

    "Fog on the ground move slowly with you
    There is a chill in the air
    This is the devil's night of fright"

    I love how this is flowing from one word to the next, very good job.

    "If you see him in your dreams never scream it might be your last. "

    I love this simple yet elegant ending to this poem .VERY good work :D keep it up!