My Girls

Aww. It made me think of all my girls. It was really well written. Nice work. 5/5

I remember they day you wrote this. You came into a thread and like demanded us all go read it.

And, we all cried, like little babies.

I love you.

I'm not sure when you wrote this, sorry i missed it. But I'm glad u'll be back. I've missed you so.

TWIN

I love my girls
Oh yes I do
They're for me
And not for you
And if by chance
You make them cry
I'll break your face
And ask you why :D

[ This was an adorable opening to your poem. I really loved it. You made it humorous but also made sure people got the message that you love your friends and would hurt whoever hurt them first. The loyalty you have shines through in this part. ]

I live for my girls
I know its true
They love me
I know that too
I want to hug them
Just once more
But I am leaving
Like before

[ Very true.. this makes me so sad. We will miss you so much when you are away, hunni. Don't worry, we won't forget you. But hopefully we'll still be able to keep in contact. ]

I will miss them
Thats no lie
My heart will break
And want to die
I'll think about them
Day and night
I want to be there
For every fight

[ We will be thinking about you too, hunni. You will always be in our hearts and prayers. We'll wish the best to you and miss you like friggin crazy.. gah! That makes me wanna cry. ]

I want to be here
Through it all
I want to catch you
If you fall
Please dont forget
The times we've had
Remember the good
Forget the bad

[ Gosh.. I just loved the rhyming here! It gave me goosebumps because it was so good. It just flowed so perfectly and was a very sweet part. Don't worry, when we remember you we'll only remember the good. ]

I'll be back
Its a promise I'll make
Smile girls
Don't let it be fake
I'll love you all no matter what
Stand up tall
And kick some butt! ((tehehe))

[ lol that's so cute! And it just shows how much you care for us and only want us to smile =) ]

Your amazing
And awesome too
Every single
Last one of you
You'll overcome
Good and bad
Made stronger
By complications you've had
I am glad I was part of that
To you all,
I tip my hat

[ I have never seen rhyming like this before. You match up the strangest things but it turns out to be so perfect in your poems, lol. Truly amazing my dear <3 ]

Notihng can ever
take your place
Or make me forget
your smiling face
I love you all
Please know its true
I will never
Ever
Ever
Ever Forget you.

[ A perfect little closing to such a beautiful poem ]

WHAT????
NOOOOOOO....
you can't leave!
*cries*

who's going to torture creepy guys with me?? :[[

This was sooooo sweet though..
awwwwww!!!
I love you!!
*hugs*

Your partner in torture,
Cayce