Wow...interesting poem, I loved the flow, so why's that one place used for a name, you didn't want to say it? lol none the less, good poem.

Woowsers that was really great and intense! i loved it it flowed so nicely it really was great! ^_^

Ooooooo i like it, very good, i suck at rhyming poems lol

AWESOME!! love it. great job. 5/5

Very nice. I've felt this way more times than I care to admit.