Why Am I Still Hurting?
by munkee04 Apr 24, 2008
|
Why do you do this to me? When I've done nothing wrong. How can you keep hurting me this way? Don't you think you're doing something wrong. All I do is love you, and all you do is hurt me. But yet, you see me still here, waiting for the day, that you'll love me too. Sometimes I just think, things will never change. But I keep my hopes up, for the time when all is not the same. I've never been outside this door, all I've done is just for you. I've lost all that I've had, everything just for you. But guess what? Don't think I'll be here long. My time is coming, for the day, when I will be gone. I'll go back to my old life, before I met you. Although I wasn't happy, I wasn't loving you. The time has come, and I've said my goodbyes, to all the hurting and all the lies. You will never see me sad again, from this day on, I will be happy till the end. |
Did You Like This Poem?
Latest Comments
-
16 years ago
I liked the emotion you had in this poem but it was kinda like a letter some of it didn't rhyme but it was still very good i write my poems like that without stanzas who cares about stanzas lol just as long as you get your point across and thanks for your comments on my poems i appreciate that 5/5
-
16 years ago
by Nix
First of all this isn't poem which you probably already know. This reminded me deeply on one situation and overall I like your piece. You have nice use of punctuation and you expressed emotion of quite strong way. Still I think that this piece would be even more better if you use some more creative words or unique metaphors. And the fact that you used some words many times in short piece as this one left pretty negative impression on me, but still, you described feelings on nice way.
