First of all this isn't poem which you probably already know. This reminded me deeply on one situation and overall I like your piece. You have nice use of punctuation and you expressed emotion of quite strong way. Still I think that this piece would be even more better if you use some more creative words or unique metaphors. And the fact that you used some words many times in short piece as this one left pretty negative impression on me, but still, you described feelings on nice way.

I liked the emotion you had in this poem but it was kinda like a letter some of it didn't rhyme but it was still very good i write my poems like that without stanzas who cares about stanzas lol just as long as you get your point across and thanks for your comments on my poems i appreciate that 5/5