Until The Day I Die

I really liked it, the rhyme scheme was great.

Your first two lines sounded as though it came right from the lyrics of a band called Story of the Year. The song has the same title as your poem. I'm not suggesting you plagiarized, but I would recommend changing it.

It's a good poem. Bonds are hard to keep, but we should always try hard to keep it strong.

Bro this poem just brought a tear to my eye. This poem is going on my favorites for one and for two...You are amazing. I love you like a brother. And I will do anything to be there for you and protect you. I hope I get to meet you in rl. Your so awesome bro, Keep writing poems and never stop. 5/5!!