Really amazing poem
and each stanza had its own deep feelings and thought, and I loved the flow in it

well done 5/5

Wow, tell you the truth you have a talent and you must reveal it.

"I've tried so hard to move along,
but a part of me within you belong,
I've tried to change my life and start afresh,
but each wave of hope continues to crash."
loved this part alot and loved the repetion too

"Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste."

This poem is so painful Ash, I can feel it.........

Though you're so long gone,
every part of me continues to mourn.
'Cos I'm still waiting and hoping to see your face,
to flow in the same love I once would taste.

:(