by Empty One Apr 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The night grows darker |
by Brad Quammen
This was a good poem and I can see that you have talent,but one thing kept bugging me and I noticed it in a couple of your poems,you spell the word dose wrong,it's does, not dose...dose is like an amount or like your falling asleep."I began to dose off"etc., just thought I would let you know. |