May I ask?

by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave   Apr 24, 2008


I set here and wounder
I wounder if I should bring it up
But yet I dont

You look at me and ask me
"What Is worng, Victoria"
I set there and look at you

Should I
May I
Ask you what is on my mind

I start to open my mouth
But then I just went blank
I want to ask you but I'm afraid

Afraid that you might turn me away
What should one to do?

I open my mouth again
And I asked
"Do you love me?"

You look at me and say
"Yes I do."

I start to cry
I cant believe that I was afraid you would say no.

You hold me close
And I just cried the night away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm that was an amazing story; u had expressed ur thougths very well

  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    That was good. The mood sets with the poem perfectly.

  • I hope so too November and thank you for your kind words

    *bow*

    ~Victoria

  • 16 years ago

    by November

    This makes me feel like there is someone who you have grown close to and like him. I say if this is true you should tell him right now and see if he likes you back!

    5/5

    p.s. Good luck to you I hope you get him!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    Beautiful
    5/5

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