by Dylan Apr 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Sunrise to sunset nothing but a man at heart with a boys spirit |
I like the intensity that the poem generates. Its very touching and i like the repetitions of the lines. It makes it sound almost like a chorus of a song. i like the personifications that you give life and the wind. though it is not something you can see like solid object concreate ...you make it sound as if they both are able to be seen and felt which is good. it brings a sense of realness to the poem |