Nice job dustin.5/5
**harlea

This is my last crime,
The last suicidal rhyme.
This is the end of Kris's time.

Powerful.

In this line,
He is to pshcopathic and killed his own self,
It's too psychopathic. Wrong too and wrong spelling.

I hope you don't mean that poem. :( You're a real special guy Kris. I'd cry for you.

It was a great poem. Five.