Comments : Temporary State of Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    I'm not sure if this is the right category to place the poem in but it's a good effort overall.

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfectly Broken

    Well, i've never read a poem like this before. but it was well written for sure. i'm not particularly favorable in this kind of poem but it was still nicely written.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    That was fantastically written...Short but filled with a very unusual idea in it..Good Job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Nicely written i love it it makes perfect since 5/5