Knife part 2

by Dustin S   Apr 24, 2008


No more reason anymore for me,
No reason to go look and see.
I'm writing another rhyme on his other arm,
Not giving a **** about my self harm.
Now Kris lay on the floor waiting to die,
He lived and gave it a try.
But Kris guessed he was no longer wanted here,
Dustin's ending ticket is near.
Kristopher has writen is his blood on the wall,
"I hated live and that's why I I wanted to fall".
To late to save him now, for he is dead,
Died to see the color red.
"I am gonna take this knife to my heart,
And see if I am a work of art." He said last,
For he died because of his past.
He was having memories that hurt,
And it had his inside burnt.
So today, 4/24/08, is his death day.

*This may just happen*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Buddy, Bro please don't do this. I am here for you! TALK TO ME. I WANNA HELP YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    DON'T DO THIS BRO DON'T DO THIS!!!
    PLEASE DO NOT GO!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    In this line,
    Now Kris lay on the floor waiting to die,
    I think you mean Kris lays on the floor and waits to die.

    Kristopher has writen is his blood on the wall,
    It's written and you added an is for no reason.

    "I hated live and that's why I I wanted to fall".
    You mean life and you have an extra I.

    To late to save him now, for he is dead,
    For the first to, it's too.

    THAT BETTER NOT HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE TOO SPECIAL KRIS! :( PLEASE DON'T! I REALLY CARE ABOUT YOU AND SO DO A LOT OF OTHER PEOPLE ON THIS SITE!!!!!!! YOU'RE SUCH A SWEET GUY! JUST TALK TO ME! PLEASE JUST PM ME AND WE CAN JUST TALK! PLEASE!

    I don't know if it matters now but this poem is a four.

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Good job dustin.just dont do it

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