Good job dustin.just dont do it

In this line,
Now Kris lay on the floor waiting to die,
I think you mean Kris lays on the floor and waits to die.

Kristopher has writen is his blood on the wall,
It's written and you added an is for no reason.

"I hated live and that's why I I wanted to fall".
You mean life and you have an extra I.

To late to save him now, for he is dead,
For the first to, it's too.

THAT BETTER NOT HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE TOO SPECIAL KRIS! :( PLEASE DON'T! I REALLY CARE ABOUT YOU AND SO DO A LOT OF OTHER PEOPLE ON THIS SITE!!!!!!! YOU'RE SUCH A SWEET GUY! JUST TALK TO ME! PLEASE JUST PM ME AND WE CAN JUST TALK! PLEASE!

I don't know if it matters now but this poem is a four.

Buddy, Bro please don't do this. I am here for you! TALK TO ME. I WANNA HELP YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DON'T DO THIS BRO DON'T DO THIS!!!
PLEASE DO NOT GO!!!!