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Wow that was an amazing poem the last part was the best i really loved it. keep it up hun.
5/5

I read ur poem and their great definitly for ur ae,, but i want u to no that i noticed that u had mention about love being in vain and u didnt want that,, but always remember love is never in vain,, it can be seasonal and theres always a reason for these things im sure uve heard before,, but it helps u grow in that area,, it will only make u a better lover and being able to notice love when its in ur face,, good job!

I love the last line... it sad i remember when i was in this too and all i can say is you might get hurt but you might get something amazing out of it. i did and been with him for 3 years now. there not all bad its just finding the right one. great poem it was a great layout nice flow. 5

I just had to reread the last line, it's so amazing. like. WOOOOOOW kinda amazing. it's just...it is a choice. life or love....

I could trust you and regret it
Get my heart broken again
But there's the chance you'll keep your promise
My hurt won't be in vain

^^ i really liked this stanza. which is funny, because the flow gets a little off here. but it's an extremely relatable stanza and i looooves it!!!

great job, love. really. 5.5