Wow.

I really liked this one.

It was kind of weird and I'm not sure if I understood the message correctly, but I still liked it. lol

My favourite part was; "Nothings really wrong, but nothings really right."

5/5 for sure.

kelsey xx

Pretty good view,
I like the format of how you write a poem,
i enjoyed the read.
well done 4/5 kiddo