Comments : The smile is fake

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Aww this poem is sad =(
    Wonderful writing though, I love you're wording. I've read poems like this but yours seems different and unique in a way.
    5/5

    Cheers xo

  • 16 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    :(
    aw,that was really good.
    I know what you mean but you just have to keep living. It will get better over time
    Really good though. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    A short but simple sad piece of poetry 5/5

    Keep Writing, lovely
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~