Comments : SMILEY NOW CRY LATER!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jasmine

    THIS POEM IS SO COOL!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice poem, I hope you solve your problem. Tip for making your poems interesting, divide them into stanza's, or at least keep each sentance in a line. O' and if you need any help send me a message anytime.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Yes, smile now and the world will smile with you but cry and they will smile without you, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    ~smile big, smile bright. the more you hide, the worse the sight. make the best, forget bout the rest.~ thats wat i say....my quote. job well done. keep it up hun. message me anytime if you need help or just wanna talk. 5/5

    *Val