I can tell when you're numb when you write a poem. idk how. but i can't feel it as much when you write a poem when you're this way...like, it's good, but it's more....closed. or maybe i'm just being stupid. i don't know.

Like screaming empty lungs out
In this numb space you can't be heard

^^ this is the one part that made me tear up...for reasons that are obvious.

Scream: till you
Cry: till you
Suffocate: then you
Die

^^ last stanza, it made me feel sick...i don't know why. but it did.

great job jesse..

Aww, no, not you jessie, your to wonderful to talk about death!really, the ending made me sad, for you, but over all it was nice

Wow, very sad but beautiful nontheless
5/5
xoxo
~waiting~