Wow hun,
this is fantabulous!
i loved every line of it, beginning to end.
the story told is that of many ((lucky)) people.
im glad God gives second changes.
or else not many would be here today
you did amazing on this.
and i wouldn't change a thing!
keep on writing..
ily soooo much!!!

I liked the writing style of this poem. Very simply written yet very strong by itself. Wonderful!

You are the best poet I've seen on here so far.

I love it its really sad but really deep its awsome great job keep up the great job!^_^