Saving Jane

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 25, 2008


New poem, new character
Let us call her Jane
Screaming tears from cried out eyes
Razors dull the pain

Crying at the mirror
Cause Jane hates what she sees
The lines along her wrists
Dull the scream of tears like these

Dear Reader, she is crying
I don't know what about
Standing in her bathroom
Tears screaming her lungs out

Maybe a bad breakup?
Or "he" never loved her at all
All I know is, she was flying
Now she had to fall

She thinks razor helps
Helps her stop the pain
Irony is deadly
As she cuts another vein

Razors get her nowhere
Her angel knows this well
Guardian angel has to save her
From scorching flames called hell

Angel holds her heart
Rebuilding broken Jane
Broken heart cuts up his hands
But he works through the pain

Broken heart cuts him deeper
Angel begins to bleed
Angel's heart is breaking
But this is what Jane needs

Angel almost done
As his heart begins to crack
Shatters into pieces
Once he put Jane's heart back

Jane's crying at the mirror
Listening to the sound her tear fall makes
Her heartbeat skips as she jumps back
Like angels heart, mirror breaks

Jane's just a little frightened
But from now on she'll be alright
Broken angel that saved her
Now walking in this moonlit night

Broken angel healing
Goes for a walk to numb the pain
Bandages and broken hearts
It was all worth saving Jane

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww
    wow, u have no idea how much i can relate. evey word describes my situation perfectly. this is defently going on my favs.! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Jane's crying at the mirror
    Listening to the sound her tear fall makes
    Her heartbeat skips as she jumps back
    Like angels heart, mirror breaks
    -fav. part
    mirrors suck,they show you things you don't wana see
    the angel is amazing..like you
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Jane's not worth saving for an angel to break. Jane's just an ordinary girl...who isn't happy. but angels deserve sunlight and joy, jesse. we both know that.

    this one made me cry. hard..

    Angel almost done
    As his heart begins to crack
    Shatters into pieces
    Once he put Jane's heart back

    ^^ i love this stanza...but i hate it..it's not fair..

    5.5