Comments : Saving Jane

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Jane's not worth saving for an angel to break. Jane's just an ordinary girl...who isn't happy. but angels deserve sunlight and joy, jesse. we both know that.

    this one made me cry. hard..

    Angel almost done
    As his heart begins to crack
    Shatters into pieces
    Once he put Jane's heart back

    ^^ i love this stanza...but i hate it..it's not fair..

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Jane's crying at the mirror
    Listening to the sound her tear fall makes
    Her heartbeat skips as she jumps back
    Like angels heart, mirror breaks
    -fav. part
    mirrors suck,they show you things you don't wana see
    the angel is amazing..like you
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Aww
    wow, u have no idea how much i can relate. evey word describes my situation perfectly. this is defently going on my favs.! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~