HEY HUBBY!

Alright, let me tell you what I think.
Wait, haven't you already showed me this? I think you have, and I think I told you I loved it. Well, anyways I do.
But anyways, I suggest adding punctuation (like commas and periods and shtuff) People on this site tend to like those. It also helps to know when your sentences end and don't.
Some people will suggest capitalizing the first letter of each line also. For some reason it bugs people to not have that.

Anyways, I heart you.

~Your wifey.

Wow!! I loved your poem!!! It reminds me of Romeo and Juliet!! i wonder if thats what you were going for? well done!! :):)