by Nix
Wow! I must say that you honestly impressed me with this poem. It is so provocative and I didn't read more powerful life-society poem in a long time. Each line is filled with great descriptions and your choice of words is very creative through whole poem. |
This poem is like no other I have read. I found it interesting, captivating, and a little unusual. |
by Ash
WOW! I am truly amazed by this one. Your style is definately different but very effective. I love the descriptiveness and your choice of words is truly applaudable. 10/5 from my side. |
by Wallace
How that was amazing, at first I didn't get it but when I read te last few lines I understood what you were saying, and the ending was classic! Fantastic work 5/5 hands down! |
by Wallace
Oh and I voted this for the contest nominations as well, yepp its that good :) |
by Lover Boii
Excellent! A great diss to society. I love it! |
by Krathia
Delivers a bitter message and hits hard. I didn't understand the first stanza, but the rest was great. |
Very true,I liked it. |
by ReinaLuvzYoo
WWwWo0o0o0o0o0owWwW is all i can say.... i luv this poem it makes so much sense...its so true...the words u chose are a fantastic fit in the poem... its so realistic and so mysterious... i really really really like it i really enjoyed reading it please write more poems yoo are so good!!!!! well done |