by Ash Apr 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Tears of my pain just falling down, |
That was so sad and touchable...I can feel ur pain and here is my favorite stanza: |
Awsome,i loved your poem(5/5) |
by Mister 47
Loving contest comment |
by Arun Khan
This was... really strong it took me back into a number of places I had closed long ago.. brilliant work ash, may you never stop writing. God bless you, you have a gift. 5/5 |
by jane
Very very good i really enjoyed this |