I like it, it was nice..hope you'll have time to read mine..^u^

I could feel the agony of the lost love and its trailing memories beautifully rendered into poetry. The repetion of the question at the end of each episode deepens the intensity of being betrayed by love. A really good poem. Keep it up.

Broken...... y do things ever break... who can say? Nice poem... keep writing
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Best wishz..

Karan

I like this one...read mine...tell me what you think

OMG! I loved this poem. It was so deep but brilliant none the less. Great job.

I'd hoped for more than just an end,
but broken pieces can never mend.

^^^that's my favorite part. You've inspired me with this poem. Thnx for the inspiration. Keep up the great work. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Waw its one of the best i see, i feel like you as we sare the same pain and you write it perfectly.all the pain and love,promises gone a way,its hurt us anyway,i add this to my favoraite well done 5/5

My friend, you have a talent to write your emotions in papers. this poem so touching and and passionate. i enjoyed reading it as i felt your pain in this poem.

well done

"You blamed me for everything that went wrong,
I should have realized it all along,
You never really cared from the start,
I was just another name on a chart "

this part was wonderfully written, good choice of words

Love the repition of the one stanza. is this a song? and the way you incorporated different rhyme schemes was nice :) 5/5

Wow ash. that was an incredible read. well versed. written words became easily visual sights on what your heart and mind went through. it's as though the reader will go through EACH and EVERY emotion you did.

very well done. 5/5

salwa

Very good indeed though i hope that who ever made you break will find that the pieces are hard for u to pick up n maybe someone will beable to help u

Very very good i really enjoyed this

This was... really strong it took me back into a number of places I had closed long ago.. brilliant work ash, may you never stop writing. God bless you, you have a gift. 5/5
Arun.

Loving contest comment

for this , i can say , :

frist it si too long , and second i hope you stick with 1 type of rhyming remmber it was a rule in the contest to have a rhyme to follow
but in general i like this , it si vvery touching , i like it !

Awsome,i loved your poem(5/5)
It touched my heart,I came to know that you have very strong emotions.
I would like that you read my poems,and leave some comments,i would love if you mark any corrections for me,as i am new,words from your side will mea alot to me.
Rate my poems as well.
If you like me,then add me to your favourites
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
Will look forward for your comments and rating on my poems.

That was so sad and touchable...I can feel ur pain and here is my favorite stanza:

you blamed me for everything that went wrong,
I should have realized it all along,
You never really cared from the start,
I was just another name on a chart

When U do love somebody while he is just playing u...He puts the blame on u and just considers u as a name not a person whom loves him..
Good job...keep it up:)5/5..