by Maria Daniel Apr 25, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
There I was as a kid, |
This is a very curious poem. Although it's difficult for me personally to empathize with the detailed life experience, it does seem to be bursting with a positive feel despite some rather generic teen expressions. But then I guess that's your point: as a poem about stepping out into the adult world I think you've captured the trepidation rather well. |