Such a sad poem.... N ya there r so many things that we feel cannot b mended...

N sumtimes we almost give up wen it was just mending...

I Know how u may feel.... Itz hard at times...

Good... keep writing..

best wishz... Karan

A very sad one indeed.. Through out the poem whats written all over is tired tired tired, it totally blends with the title.. The flow was abit rocky at some places but generally it was a work well done. Glad that the love for your kids keeps you strong, hope all the best comes in your life.

It's poem of being tired and lonely. Emotions come out as a poem. It's good as a poem but certainly painful. Keep writing...

Can totally understand very emotional but thats the way you are so dont change as you only write the words you feel. get it out it can sometimes help.