"Words of wisdom I can no longer here."
[Words of wisdom I can no longer HEAR]
"With a stabbed heart my lifes joy bleeds out."
[With a stabbed heart, my life's joy bleeds out]
Take to note, there's a comma and life = life's (you own it).
"Could this have been avoided, thats something I doubt."
[Could this have been avoided? That's something I dbout]
NOTE: Two sentences. Thats = THAT IS = That's
"The only option is it was fate, something I ignorantly denied until now."
[ The only option is fate, something I ignorantly denied until now]
"Money truly can not buy happiness, that Ive come to know well."
[Money truly CANNOT buy happiness, that I'VE come to know TOO well]
Overall you have a good poem. It has a great meaning to it. You've distrubted the emotion quite well throughout it and written it well as well. You've also done a magnificant job on the flow (othe than the ending)- once you fix the ending it will be a GREAT poem