Sweetness, Do You Know?

by GoodMorning   Apr 25, 2008


Sweetness, do you know?
You're the romantic comedy
Following that suspenseful thriller.

And through the chaotic noises of our lives,
Our hearts will continuously harmonize.

The worlds we've created in our minds
Filled with love and care and happiness
Will soon be brought to life;

They will merge with superiority
To those doubtful thoughts of cynical minds.

Our love is strong, invincible.
It will not be broken down,
It will not erode with the passing of time.

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Hum. Not quite sure it's finished,
but my brain isn't coming up with anymore to add atm.
I appreciate any comments/suggestions. =)

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  • 15 years ago

    by katie

    Great poem! I think its fine the way it is. Loved the whole thing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A great poem. i dont think you need ot add anything on to it, i like it the way it is. it was lovely and worded very wisely.

    And through the chaotic noises of our lives,
    Our hearts will continuously harmonize

    those lines were my favorite. i loved them. very powerful to me. very detailed. job well well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    That was really nice... keep writing,

    Best wishz... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very nice poem and I think it's long enough...good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Tehee, why thank ya very muches! =)
    I'll see what I can do. (;

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