I liked this poem alot but you should tell more not something we already know, thats what i think you should've done. like make it more interesting. I mean you did get the point across of what a tragedy is and why is it in our lives but for some reason it shouldve been a little more but im not really good for giving poem advice but thats just my thought, you don't have to listen to it or not. =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.