Digital Ghost

Amazing lines! 5/5 for you!

You're one of the great Author on this Site!

It's nice I like how you repeated the first stanza at the end it really brought the poem all together. This poem is sad, I know how it feels when you only have a picture to look at from someone that you will never be able to talk to. The title caught my attention, so all together a beautiful well written poem.

It has already been said but I also agree about the clarity of emotion this demonstrates. Since I assume we have all had at least one experience like this we should all be able to write a poem about it. You have already done it for us! I wrote one about old letters, probably before we all had digital cameras, but I like yours just as much if not more.

Let me tell you one thing, amazing.

The flow is smooth, even though you classified it as a love poem Which is obvious that you or whoever was or is in love. But it's so sad because it's just a one sided love. All that is left are memories, pictures that are the greatest treasure of all the things and many can relate to this piece.

Firstly, congratulations on the win. You really do deserve it.. even for the title alone. I love it!!
I particularly like how you repeated the first verse at the end.. really got the idea across.

Don't get me wrong.. this poem is amazing how it is.. but I just a had a suggestion...??
In the third verse, second line:

"stains forever left where a smile once stood"

I was thinking that maybe it could have been:

'ghosts forever left...' OR EVEN
'shadows forever left...'

Just a suggestion...!!

But honestly, I absolutely love this piece.. the title alone is poetic beauty!! (:
5/5