by Teria
This is an amazing poem as well. I absolutely adored it. of course it's sad... but so many can relate to it. From losing someone by divorce/separation/death... so on. And, you've chosen your words perfectly. |
by Hebe
What a beautiful sad poem. |
Wow, beautiful. Great job, 5/5 by far ^^ hope to read more of yours |
Firstly, congratulations on the win. You really do deserve it.. even for the title alone. I love it!! |
by L
Let me tell you one thing, amazing. |
by Ste
It has already been said but I also agree about the clarity of emotion this demonstrates. Since I assume we have all had at least one experience like this we should all be able to write a poem about it. You have already done it for us! I wrote one about old letters, probably before we all had digital cameras, but I like yours just as much if not more. |
by Kitty Kurse
It's nice I like how you repeated the first stanza at the end it really brought the poem all together. This poem is sad, I know how it feels when you only have a picture to look at from someone that you will never be able to talk to. The title caught my attention, so all together a beautiful well written poem. |
Amazing lines! 5/5 for you! |