The quote is ironic. ridiculously ironic. i hate it.

The poem is amazing...i didn't want to read it. i was afraid i would cry...thank god i didn't. thank god for "what the buck" playing in the background..but it's great jesse.

A deeply touching piece of poetry 5/5 this piece has a very important message inside of it. brilliant piece

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

I loved this poem. It says a lot and it's what is on people minds when things go bad. Well kinda is to me.

but 5/5 great job

Normally i would quote my favorite part of ur poems but w/ this 1 i just couln't choose! but i luv the quote at the bottom, it's so true. well, this is 1 of ur best poems yet, keep it up. 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

The poem and the quote were both excellent,
makes you think,5/5

Great job keep this up x

Yo now diz is a good poem

Wow.
This is an awesome poem.
I really, really like it!

Wonderfully written. 5/5