She broke me even more

by Rachel   Apr 26, 2008


I poured my soul into my friend
But she broke it even more
she thought i put it there for her to lend
what a stupid little w****

She sold it for an insane price
not for her own gain
But the thought of my pain did entice
My friend to become insane

She may have stabbed yoou in the back
But she stabbed me in the front
i watched her twist it, mercy lacked
that dirty stinking little runt

hold my hand till the pain stops
and then I'll get her back
I'll clean up the mess with a bloody mop
while my lifeless body in a sack

**i dont really like this poem but any helpful critisism would be much appreciated**

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  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaLuvzYoo

    Weelll actually its not that bad...... in fact its pretty good, u got a good idea going maybe you should look at the last paragraph its a lil weird ( no offense) i would give it a 3and-a-half/5