I CONFESS I CAN'T LET YOU GO

by noha   Apr 26, 2008


Today I wonder if what I did was right.
To be within myself and let my heart fight.
To lose someone so special like you.
And never to let out even a slight clue.

I confess I was always crazy about you.
I admit I couldn't stop falling in love with you.
You filled my empty feeling within.
For you were with me through thick and thin.

Every time I spoke to you.
The more I fell in love with you.
I had no choice but to let it go.
For I could bear an empty heart, but not lose a smile that made the dark glow.

I saw my dream breaking, and yet I held back my tears.
To fulfill your dreams which you always whispered close to my ears.
I was in pain and yet I pretended to be strong.
As I always wished for you to be right and me to be wrong.

I stayed quiet even when you said I am going away,
My heart wanted you to stop.
But my lips didn't have the strength to say.
Holding back everything, I saw you go away.

There is no-one who can take your place.
For I have stitched my heart with your love's lace.
Captured in it is the memoir of your face.
For I would never find again this beauty and grace.

Now it makes me wonder, if I had committed a blunder.
Wonder if you ever felt the same.
Wonder if your heart skipped a beat,
Every time you mentioned my name.

I should have expressed the way I felt.
Whatever the consequence I would have dealt.
I will love you forever.
To let you go, A hope that may be next to never.

I CONFESS I CAN'T LET YOU GO.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Lovely poem. the emotion is so strong and the flow was PERFECT.
    great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Oh! what can i say?? you exactly describe the feeling and the situation that i'm currently experiencing.. your work is like a simple story that people/readers would love to read all over again coz i know people can easily picture themselves as the main character of this piece..

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Wow... this piece is so brilliant... the rhyme, the flow, the way you wrote it, EVERYTHING! i read it and i was like "that is so amazing" and maybe it's because it reminds me of the way i feel for Daimon, or maybe because it is the BEST POEM THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!! the description of your love was just so amazing... it is the exact way i feel for Daimon in every tiny little detail... it is so amazing

    5/5 - i only wish i could make it higher

    Keep Writing, hun
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    This poem is great..
    and these are the lines I like!
    ~To be within myself and let my heart fight.
    ~I admit I couldn't stop falling in love with you.
    ~I saw my dream breaking, and yet I held back my tears. (ouch!)
    ~My heart wanted you to stop.
    But my lips didn't have the strength to say.(I knew it was hard..)
    ~I should have expressed the way I felt. (it's hard but it's worth it)

    thanks..

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Love indeed a horrid and great thing nice write

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