by Cindy
This is a very sad piece. Yet it is also dark and spine chilling. It makes the reader feel as if they are watching some kind of evil ritual. |
by Lemonbread
I love how you both started this poem and how you ended it. Its certainly breath taking and chilling with a twist at the end. |
by Baby Rainbow
Omg, thats excellent, awesome job. wow. well done and hope to read more! xxx |
Wow that was awesome. i though i loved it. |
by ECILA ice
This poem is so powerful and very dark.. it talks about anguish that can't be cure, and the only way to resolved it to surrender your life.. i know most of us wanted to give up that easily butthat is not the solution. |
I love Death Note!!! ^.^ *is an anime freak* I've only gotten to the part right after L dies though. It was so sad. T.T |
by Dark Secrets
Great poem! you described love's pains nicely as being written in a deathnote (know the series tottally adicted)... sad thing he kills the one who loves him. |