I miss u ............come back soon

by shivali   Apr 26, 2008


Sitting alone in a corner,

when i was completely in tears,

it was your face that frequently appeared,

your eyes with love,

your lips with smile,

your tender touch that makes me cure,

is all what i want for sure!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    I like it alot its really deep in nt that many words lovin it

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    Very good.....i like it...5/5......= )

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Not bad a short one , !! but , if is fair enough , i like free poetry, but you need in it to keep structuring your ryming

    free poetry is good ,
    but the good ryming one and structured one are the msot one remmbered and they stick in our minds,
    your words are beautiful and the metaphores are great ,
    jsut , work a little on your lines and edit it

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Sweet,Short & Simple

    your tender touch that makes me cure,
    is all what i want for sure!

    ^ Maybe change too your tender touch is my cure, it is all i want for sure ...

    Other than that its a really cute poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Thats what everyone is looking for. ny way nice poem=)

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