Bestfriend love

by clodette castro   Apr 26, 2008


I had a best friend
who is so kind,
he is my friend
and his always on my mind
we're always calling on to each other
he filled my life with joy and laughter
he always makes me laugh
and we both wished that we will never be apart
in my hour of need, he's always there
and i like to show him
that i also care
we both like to face the sun
because we think it would be fun
the days that we have shared together
we hope that this would be forever
he said he will guide me till the end
and he could be there what ever will happen
one day he told me the words "i love you"
by that time i realized
that "i love him too"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney

    Good job.

    There was a little bit of unnecessary repetition.
    ("he filled my life with joy and laughter
    he always makes me laugh")

    I would suggest improving your grammar, too.

    Other than that, keep up the great work.:)